Battosai810's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NiN10Doh!]

2 of my favorite flash authors and then some!

A Nintendo collab with Kirbopher and JohnNRichie? That's a friggin dream come true!
Most collabs have some weak points; a segment or two that's really not funny, but this one was fantastic start to finish. Well, the toad/boo one wasn't great, but doesn't hurt the overall score. Fav'd.

[The Eggies: "Purr"]

Cute.

First the negative points - the preloader sound was pretty obnoxious, and the first time I loaded it, it just wouldn't finish loading. Reloaded and it ran fine.
Positive - it's nice to see clean humor around on NG. Not many people like you and me stick to that sort of thing. The art was nice and simple, as was the story itself. Keep making more cartoons in this series; I'd really like to see what you can come up with next.

Mirak responds:

Yeah, i shall never use a preloader not made by me. :P
I had to download one because i was in a rush to finish it, so i didn't do it myself.

I didn't notice about the repetitive sounds on the preloader until my sister yelled in pain. I shall do more of this when i get a better plot, better backgrounds and better music. =P

Also, i was lazy on the sounds volume too, i should had lowered the bounce sound.

[Barnyard Hijinx]

Nothing special.

Art and animation were sloppy, and the sound quality was pretty lousy. This isn't a bad submission by any means, just not one that deserves front page honors. Keep working at it and improve your drawing skills, and maybe you'll get something really good someday. This is just a rough starting point.

[Transformers Bastardized]

Hah, hilarity.

Funny stuff; great fandubbing.
Also, really brings out how absurd the first 15 minutes of the Transformers movie - The Autobots are still shooting like everyone did on the TV show while the Decepticons shoot to kill.
Great parody!

[Xent - Love]

Beautiful

That was a great animation there. You said you had trouble with the paper, but I think the quality of the toon made up for that. Keep up the good work, and good luck on getting that tablet!

[Hand Job]

Loved it

THE GLOVE DOES NOTHING!!!!
Great style, solid sense of humor too. Also, nice video quality; something that's really lacking on newgrounds. Keep up the good work!

[Advice with Mr. Fantardo]

Screamers = lame

Everyone got tired of those years ago. Try putting in some effort and make something watchable.

[The Anglo-Saxon Chronicle]

Enjoyable!

I did a report on 1066 and such a while ago, if this flash was around it would have made things a whole lot easier!
Real simple, not much animation, but a good sense of humor with it. Hope you make more!

[Hyakugojyuuichi Forever!!]

gave me a headache...

but hey, that's what animutation is all about! nice job squeezing an obscene amount of references and crazy animation into that. good work!

[The Deathening]

I enjoyed that more than I should have

For some reason, I found that really funny; no clue why.
As far as improving goes - I'd try not to hold back when recording dialogue. Don't be afraid to yell and shout; could have made your toon even funnier!
3ELIEVE IT!