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A decent joke, nothing more

I watched the Dragonball trailer with a few friends, and our reaction was exactly like yours, just louder and angrier.

The art was mostly just a few screenshots and some half decent animation at the end. As you said, however - quick flash, and that it looks horrible. I don't think it looks quite that bad, but it's not great by any means.

The reaction itself is a pretty good joke. I agree with it completely.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

I wish I coulda gotten that damned audio louder.
MY MICROPHONE IS A LYING WHORE.

-grumbles-

Thanks for the review.

I love your work, and this is no exception.

Your art and animation just keep getting better and better with each Siblings cartoon. Even though you said you got real lazy on the Twilight movie sequences, they still looked great for what they were meant to convey.

The humor never ceases to entertain either. Quick witted jokes and some over the top performances really make this episode stand out. Also, your take on Twilight was really entertaining. I didn't see the movie, but from everything I've heard from my friends about it, you hit it right on the head.

I really hope this flash gets the attention it deserves and gets front page! Great work, and really looking forward to the next Siblings flash!

Bobert-Rob responds:

I was pretty lazy with the Twilight parts. I worked a little more on the backgrounds than I thought I would, but it's all still pretty basic. Works, though. Thanks for the indepth review, dude, I always enjoy those. And thanks for watching! Thanks all around.

Rather "meh"

The art was up to your excellent standard, but the animation was very limited.

The joke was not very funny, and left me wanting, waiting for something funny to happen.

My score is reflective purely of the art quality. As pretty as this flash is, it lacks entertainment value.

I have no idea who debiase is

But I actually enjoyed this. This random guy's head pasted on the Powerthirst guy's body, ripping the Taco Bell dog's head off to the US Army commercial music is pretty solid entertainment in my opinion.

Could have used more senseless dog killing, but this served rather well as stupid entertainment. Nice job.

PV2Deebs responds:

great success

Cleared up a bit since your first one

I saw your last Madness Samurai, and I'm happy to hear you've explained a bit. The plot, although basic and overdone, is at least in place, and the Samurai has some motive for killing these bad guys.

Also, there is a little bit of blood in there now, and although it doesn't look great, it is there. You said you planned to improve it as well in your comments. I didn't notice the lack of feet till you pointed that out in your comments either.

The animation is still very jerky and could stand some improvement. You may want to up the frame rate to get more precise movements from your characters.

All in all, a slight improvement over the last Madness Samurai, but far from greatness.

MonoFlauta responds:

ok, i know the blood thing, and thanks for this tip:

"You may want to up the frame rate to get more precise movements from your characters."

thanks

Bog standard Madness tribute

Before you even start animating, you should really think of a plot for your cartoon. "Revenge" is the most common theme to pull out of nowhere, but revenge for what? Why does he want revenge? Why does he want blood? He has no motive here. That plot is stupidly simple, but at least it's a plot.

Second is actually one of your lines - "For revenge and blood" yet there is no blood in your animation. The graphics were bland and undetailed, even the ripped sprites. Animation was a little jerky, but was mostly okay. Sound was nothing special.

This flash just seems like any other Madness "tribute" in that it seems dull and uninspired. Some guys die, it ends really abruptly, and overall it leaves the viewer uninterested. Work in a story of some sort if you try this sort of thing again.

MonoFlauta responds:

"Why does he want revenge? Why does he want blood? "

its the first cap... you will know it later -.-

"there is no blood in your animation"

i said that i will put blood for the next one -.-

Whatchya doin' mister dinosaur?

Nice art and entertaining animation. Loved watching them snort lines of coke, just as best buddies should. But what a twist ending! Never saw it coming.

Nice SRM Transformers 4 poster, now everyone knows.

Coke Joke.

TheL1st responds:

yah me and a friend thought up the coke and i decided to add the scene after with them tripping out from it.

A start, if an overdone one

Madness flashes are dime a dozen here on Newgrounds. You're going to have to make a bigger impact with your flash to have it stand out. This is just another "guy A wants revenge on shady organization B" storyline, which is really week. The only difference is that this time he has a helmet.

The art is alright, but it may just be from a sprite sheet. The animation is jerky as well.

As for the .swf to .fla question - check your recycle bin. If it isn't there, you can just import the .swf into flash like you would any other file. That should do the trick.

Keep working. Once this is done you should try something non-Madness related. It'll do you good to work on original content with a more complex plot.

30001 responds:

thank you very much. i checked all my files and the SWF is beyond me. as for non madness related flashes, check my Zombific attack movies.

Poor

The art quality was almost universally poor. Most of the collab segments looked like they took 3 seconds instead of lasting 3 seconds, harsh as it sounds.

Having a collaboration with such an abstract topic hurts it more than it helps it. There was nothing tying one segment to the next aside from the length, which was, as the title says, 3 seconds. It made it feel almost like watching a Warioware game, which is almost headache inducing.

The sound was almost non existent, as the song was it. It looped poorly as well, and was a little bit annoying.

Sorry, but this collab was not terrible enjoyable. I didn't even smirk at most of the humor, and it was almost universally low quality work. I can only advise to make a more cohesive collab next time, and improve your art and animation.

Despite the fact that it's meme based humor

I really enjoyed that.

Something about Weegee really makes me laugh - I haven't the faintest idea why.

Decent enough art, kind of stiff animation, but entertaining work nonetheless.

Kyaztro responds:

Yeah, I've caughten on to all the originality issues here, but yeah I love good ol'
Weegee

I'm Camtoons. I make cartoons. That's not confusing or anything.

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